poptarts47's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[- Selfless Hero -]

WOW

awesome really gets you pumped up, its like an opening score to a show or movie SWEET job. i like the rhythm guitar

aDropInTheOcean responds:

:) thanks, glad you liked it

[-The Beach-]

really neat!!

i liked it it reminded me of a lot of great collages in movies and t.v. shows in the 80's and early 90's like your preparing for action. very creative, also reminds me of older versions of James Horners scores.

5/5
9/10

aDropInTheOcean responds:

Hey, thanks for your comments, I like a bit of nostalgia maybe that's why this track reminds you of those times.

[=Dark Recluse=]

WOW

awesome sounds like your on an empty highway at night driving fast on a motor cycle and you are just going forever

Atundra responds:

thanks man! never thought of it that way!

[=GOT NUTS?!=]

lol

the pitch being blended almost sounds like its saying go nuts. really creative i like it a lot the piano is a really good addition nice head bopping beat but it sounds more like someone is being chased and barely getting away. i find it cute in a weird way like it belongs in little big planet

AWESOME

Atundra responds:

haha yeah i always thought of this as a chase song, thanks alot for your reviews man!

[WIP - =Pipe Dreams=]

i like the drums

i like the attempt on the filters to you put a echo filter on it?

also the chords are dissonant. find what chords mathc your song

there is a lot going on which is good because it is organised chaos which is very well done i like the minor bridge, really brings out the end good job :)

mess around more with the chords

Atundra responds:

hey thanks alot for the review man!

I made the chords before i made the melodies, so I was more matching the melodies to the chords, this song is kind of deliberately meant to sound dissonant, to give it that wierd vibe, ( idk thats just what came out of me when i made this song lol). But i will defenitely pay more attention to it so it matches nicer next time ;)

Thanks for the review!

[Grasping for the Wind]

OOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

WOWY ZOWY COWY POWY reminds me of david neuve. you are really good maybe just ease up on the echo.

BlazingDragon responds:

I wasn't familiar with David Nevue, but I looked him up after reading this review. His music is relaxing and emotional. Thank you for introducing me to some great new material! :)

[Not The One]

good melody

but the melody gets gets drowned out by to much distortion and there is to much sustain on each chord. but when you hear the melody its clear and nice but you need to clear that up its very indie very nice and when you fix it add some percussion in it i like the end its soothing :)

neoshaolin responds:

Thanks for checking this out and reviewing it! :D Yeah, I may have to fix how thick I had the distortion. I'll definitely see what I can do about the lack of drums. A lot of my tunes are really hurting for them.

[R.Y.P.M.D.U.M.]

WOW

dude kick ass i like the re-verb, but the rain sound effect needs to cut of like a measure later. but yeah i like the riff in the beginning. good stuff you got some fiery hands

neoshaolin responds:

I'm just now seeing this review, man. They REALLY should make some kind of update feature. So, that we can see when someone posts a review. Anyway...

THANKS A TON, MAN! :D I tend to hold back a lot when I'm focusing on song structure and writing. So, I don't come off as the "flashy guitarist. " But, I had been reading the hendrix biography at the time, and it just made me want to make an ode to my first idol. Which you CAN'T make a tribute to hendrix without some fiery fretting in there somewhere! XD

[Let Me]

its good but........

to much distortion in the begining and the chorus or bridge is not entering in. sorry idk if that makes sense i like it though. just a litle tunning in the entrence of each part.

neoshaolin responds:

Thanks, I'm glad you liked it! I'll definately see if I can work on that.

[{Saw of Jebus}]

a little better

i like it but now the main melody is to sawish try messing around with a different sound. but so far good.

crusherxt responds:

i dont think so but i maybe if i put the beginning melody behind it would be better? u digg.