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[WIP - =Pipe Dreams=]

i like the drums

i like the attempt on the filters to you put a echo filter on it?

also the chords are dissonant. find what chords mathc your song

there is a lot going on which is good because it is organised chaos which is very well done i like the minor bridge, really brings out the end good job :)

mess around more with the chords

Atundra responds:

hey thanks alot for the review man!

I made the chords before i made the melodies, so I was more matching the melodies to the chords, this song is kind of deliberately meant to sound dissonant, to give it that wierd vibe, ( idk thats just what came out of me when i made this song lol). But i will defenitely pay more attention to it so it matches nicer next time ;)

Thanks for the review!

[Grasping for the Wind]

OOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

WOWY ZOWY COWY POWY reminds me of david neuve. you are really good maybe just ease up on the echo.

BlazingDragon responds:

I wasn't familiar with David Nevue, but I looked him up after reading this review. His music is relaxing and emotional. Thank you for introducing me to some great new material! :)

[Not The One]

good melody

but the melody gets gets drowned out by to much distortion and there is to much sustain on each chord. but when you hear the melody its clear and nice but you need to clear that up its very indie very nice and when you fix it add some percussion in it i like the end its soothing :)

neoshaolin responds:

Thanks for checking this out and reviewing it! :D Yeah, I may have to fix how thick I had the distortion. I'll definitely see what I can do about the lack of drums. A lot of my tunes are really hurting for them.

[R.Y.P.M.D.U.M.]

WOW

dude kick ass i like the re-verb, but the rain sound effect needs to cut of like a measure later. but yeah i like the riff in the beginning. good stuff you got some fiery hands

neoshaolin responds:

I'm just now seeing this review, man. They REALLY should make some kind of update feature. So, that we can see when someone posts a review. Anyway...

THANKS A TON, MAN! :D I tend to hold back a lot when I'm focusing on song structure and writing. So, I don't come off as the "flashy guitarist. " But, I had been reading the hendrix biography at the time, and it just made me want to make an ode to my first idol. Which you CAN'T make a tribute to hendrix without some fiery fretting in there somewhere! XD

[Fireflies (Owl City) - Cover]

wow

i love the minor guitar chords they fit so well i love this its amazing. you cant say its better than the original and you cant say its worse it is its own song its is just great and the synth strings compliment the song as well in the chorus. i really enjoy your work.

[Let Me]

its good but........

to much distortion in the begining and the chorus or bridge is not entering in. sorry idk if that makes sense i like it though. just a litle tunning in the entrence of each part.

neoshaolin responds:

Thanks, I'm glad you liked it! I'll definately see if I can work on that.

[Fur Elise - Acoustic - Reich]

great

as good as the original but has a warmer feeling

[{Saw of Jebus}]

a little better

i like it but now the main melody is to sawish try messing around with a different sound. but so far good.

crusherxt responds:

i dont think so but i maybe if i put the beginning melody behind it would be better? u digg.

[Piano Piece002]

wow

i liked it its part minimal in the melody and part romaticism, and part modern great piece. you are very talented.

[Stargazer (SFM)]

hmmmm

i like the beat the flow you should add another riff but just a little higher on the scale. i like the piano allot it helps everything flow.

ShadowXForever responds:

Thanks you ^^